Consequences of love

If you have my novel Bringer of Justice, these comments will make sense to you. If you have not read the novel, they may not make sense to you. I do not want to explain more because it could ruin your enjoyment of the novel if you have not yet had a chance to read it. In the second novel in the series, the protagonist, Vir, is dealing with the consequences of love. I am finding it difficult to write. Nothing I have written so far is good enough. I had hoped Vir would give me some clues, but that has not happened. Yet?